tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849276562522008473.post3581149338133386297..comments2023-04-07T04:14:13.866-04:00Comments on robsblog: How Did You Start Your Summer?Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13958901608536505274noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849276562522008473.post-86721865443508656912013-06-21T10:25:26.590-04:002013-06-21T10:25:26.590-04:00Oh no problem. So did they figure out why no one ...Oh no problem. So did they figure out why no one got on the bus? lolAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13828051919855063019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849276562522008473.post-1066526419552800042013-06-21T09:55:17.026-04:002013-06-21T09:55:17.026-04:00I rewrote that section. Changed a few tenses and a...I rewrote that section. Changed a few tenses and added a wee bit more info. Does it make sense now?<br /><br />I tell these stories to see how they work and then give my blog to the same group of people to proof and get feedback from, they already knew the story so didn't find it confusing. <br /><br />Thanks for pointing it out.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13958901608536505274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849276562522008473.post-47636692057784358042013-06-21T09:40:22.005-04:002013-06-21T09:40:22.005-04:00Ok call me dumb, but I didn't understand the s...Ok call me dumb, but I didn't understand the story about the 6:50 and the kids not getting on the bus. lol Explain?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13828051919855063019noreply@blogger.com